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Neil Simon’s play inadvertently illustrates the ills of old-style marriage
By Lucy Komisar
Neil Simon’s “Barefoot in the Park” is an historical
collection of BF moments. BF means “before Friedan” or “before feminism.” It was
first staged in 1963, the same year that Betty Friedan’s “The Feminine Mystique”
was published, and it is an illustration of what was wrong then with many
married women’s lives.
As theater, the revival at the Cort is on the level of TV
sitcom. For a comedy, it often seems leaden. But as sociology, it’s fascinating.
It’s appropriate that it opened less than two weeks after Friedan’s death again
focused public attention on her landmark book.
Corie Bratter (Amanda Peet) has just married Paul (Patrick
Wilson), a 26-year-old lawyer starting out in a new firm. They’ve spent a
six-day honeymoon at the Plaza Hotel, most of it in bed. Now, they have a
sixth-floor walkup on West 11th Street in Greenwich Village. It’s February,
there’s a hole in the skylight, and the apartment is freezing. That fits the
culture of this marriage, which, out of bed, is from the Ice Age, BF.
Home from the office, Paul gets a phone call and reports
that he will try a big case in the morning. He pulls out his legal briefs and
Corie pulls off her clothes, down to her underwear. “Pay attention to me,”
screams her black negligee. A BF moment!
What is the matter with this woman? What’s the matter is
that she doesn’t have a job, much less a career and needs her husband’s
attentions all the time.
Days later, when he comes home, he remarks that she has
called him eight times at work! A BF moment! Can’t this supposedly intelligent
young lady find something to do all day? Like get a job?
With the hope of interesting the neighbor, Vincent Velasco
(Tony Roberts), in her widowed mother, Ethel Banks (Jill Clayburgh), Corie
thinks about pretending that mother is a former actress or writer. Not just a
housewife. A BF moment! What about herself?
When Paul is miffed at Corie’s behavior, Mrs. Banks’s
advice to Corie is to “make him feel important.” Another BF moment.
Corie says she wants someone who’s dependable and takes
care of her. A BF moment!
Corie is supposed to be a madcap free spirit contrasted
with a husband so uptight that he double-folds his jockey shorts. But with Scott
Elliott’s sitcom direction, Corie seems just a dumb flake. She mixes a 3-to-1
martini, but it’s 3 parts vermouth. When she shakes it, it spurts on her dress.
She’s not a free spirit, she’s a schlemiel.
Patrick Wilson’s portrayal of Paul lacks the charm of a
Robert Redford, who starred in the original production. Admittedly, he’s a hard
act to follow. Though Wilson perhaps is more realistic as an unexciting,
buttoned-up lawyer. Jill Clayburgh is appealing as Ethel; her transition from
selfish and overbearing to a more open and freer spirit shows some character
movement. Amanda Peet as her daughter seems one-dimensional. She doesn’t change
at all, though Simon’s dated script doesn’t give her many choices.
Adam Sietz delivers the best performance of the play as the
phone repairman. He’s a believable person, sloppy, overweight, and connected to
the others in real space, not a cartoon world.
The misadventures of the odd couples repeatedly descend
into sitcom. There’s silly stuff about exotic but strange-tasting food and the
perils of a night-time expedition to Staten Island.
There are some typically mildly funny Simon one-liners.
Velasco, who wears Birkenstocks, looks at the couple’s unfurnished apartment and
asks Corie, “Are you a folk singer?” Roberts replaced Redford as Paul in the
original production. His Velasco is supposed to be slightly bizarre, but he
comes across as pretty normal, at least for Greenwich Village in the sixties.
There’s an inside joke in the script that most in the
audience won’t get. Corie yells some sexy remarks down to her husband, who she
thinks is coming up the stairs. Suddenly she calls out hello to “Mr. Munshin,” a
neighbor on the floor below, who it turns out had come into the building the
same time as Paul. It’s a throw-away line; you never see him.
“Munshin” was Jules Munshin, a comic actor who was part of
the group of performers and writers around Sid Caesar and Imogene Coca in the
1950s, which included Neil Simon. When the first “Velasco” left the original
Broadway cast, Julie took over the role for 3 ½ years. Julie’s widow, Bonnie, a
former dancer, runs Nick & Toni’s, the trendy East Hampton restaurant. Julie was
my uncle.
Postscript: I predict Paul, the bright lawyer, will get
tired of his twit of a wife and find someone interesting with brains, and a job.
The divorce that didn’t happen after two weeks will happen after a couple of
years. Corie can always move back to her mother’s in New Jersey. Unless someone
very soon gives her a copy of “The Feminine Mystique.”
“Barefoot in the Park.” Written by
Neil Simon. Directed by Scott Elliott. Starring Amanda Peet, Patrick Wilson,
Jill Clayburgh, Tony Roberts, Adam Sietz, Sullivan Walker.
Cort Theatre, 138 West 48th St. Tue-Sat 8pm; Wed & Sat 2pm;
Sun 3pm. Running time: 2:15. $26.25-$96.25. 212-239-6200. 800-432-7250.
http://barefootintheparkbroadway.com/.
by Carol Rosegg.
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